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  • Mar. 19th, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Komui ⇢ Default
☆ How's My Roleplaying?

For: Komui Lee ([info]coffee_gemini ) from D.Gray-man as played by [info]saffire_persian @ [info]polychromatic

So, how am I doing? Too serious, too spastic, so out of character you could just die? If I'm doing something wrong let me know here. Any critique/suggestions/comments whatever is welcome and greatly appreciated. If you need to get in contact with me for any reason, you can also do so here, be it for plotting, crediting some icons, or some other reason. If you want to talk to me personally, you can also get me by my AIM handle  Saffirepersian  or by e-mail undersaffiresky [at] gmail [dot] com .

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{ Coffee Break 008 - Accidental Video }

  • Sep. 15th, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Komui ⇢ Rise or Fall
[The video feed flickers on to center in on a tall man moving briskly down a narrow, deserted hallway towards the room where the communicator is undoubtedly resting. As he draws closer it's easy enough to tell he is obviously distracted, talking into some microphone on a headset that obviously not from the city.]

What do you mean they broke through? What do we know? Anything? Has one of the golems managed to get a lock on th--

[He cuts himself off as he finally finds himself in the room at the end of the hallway. He hesitates, scanning the room with a look of sudden realization, his tense form visibly relaxing somewhat.] ...Ah.

{ Coffee Break 007 - Video }

  • Jun. 24th, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Komui ⇢ Applause
[Cue a few moments of static as a voice chatters on excitedly in what seems to be an indecipherable mix of Chinese, English, and some other language in between. A few more seconds pass, and the video screen flickers on to reveal a robot that seems to be a hybrid between this and this. It's bulky, though considerably smaller than his usual models, though he'll take what he can get. It's also completely decked out thanks to the curse. Not only can you see your own reflection in the metal, but it seems to sparkle in all its robotic glory.

A few feet away from it, Komui looks like he doesn't even know quite to do with himself or his creation that's been some time in the making. But he loves his little Komurin. You can tell. And himself.]


IT'S FINISHED!

[Yes, even his voice seems to sparkle in honor of the occasion.]

{ Coffee Break 006 - Voice }

  • Jun. 16th, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Komui ⇢ Not His Day
[//Filtered to members of the Black Order]

I can't find her.

{ Coffee Break 004 - Voice }

  • May. 22nd, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Komui ⇢ Applause
Kaaaaaaanda, your golem's finished! Come get it!

[[//Filtered To Members of the Black Order. Unhackable.//]]

All right. I want to everyone who is here to check in.  If someone from the Order is unable to get to one of these communicative devices or is otherwise preoccupied, feel free to vouch for them.  I also want to know how long each of you have been here--if you can't remember exactly, estimate--and if any of you have tried to get out, what have you done to do so. And if there are any individuals from our world that have been here that you can recall, but are no longer here, mention it so I can keep track.

[//end filter.]

[ooc: I assume Komui gave Kanda some kind of crude device to use until his abused  golem was finished. But *shrugs*.]

{ Coffee Break 003 - Voice }

  • May. 11th, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Komui ⇢ Not Exactly
Now to get all this hair out.

It's still even in the coffee.

{ Coffee Break 002 - Text }

  • Mar. 26th, 2009 at 3:34 PM
Komui ⇢ Default
Right.

To my students enrolled in my Synthetics & Scientology course or in my one of my sewing classes: class is canceled. Fourth time this week, I know. But does it matter? Go back to sleep, break your alarm clock, hakuna matata, and all that.

I'd go ahead and say finals are as of now canceled as well, as I have no idea what I'm going to test anyone on, but unfortunately I'm required to have them whether I want to or not. My best advice to those of you who have nerves as thin as a piece of string, is to chill, have a cup of coffee, and just relax. It isn't worth stressing over. No need to even study. If you know the material you know the material, if you don't, you don't. Ohhhh well. That's life. Nobody's going to hold it against you in the long run~

I won't, anyway.

I'll also be at the Turnabout Café if anyone needs anything.
Komui ⇢ You Go First
[Have a tall, Asian man wandering nonchalantly about the city. He seems more curious than distressed, and is checking everything out in the city that catches his eye with a great amount interest, perhaps lingering a bit too long at any and all coffee shops.]

[At one point, he finally takes notice of the communicator that has somehow found his way into one of his coat's pockets, and takes it out and stares at it, intrigued. Because, hey, buttons. This, of course, leads to him trying to figure out what the communicator does. Which in Komui's terms means poking at a lot of buttons at the same time until something interesting happens, then rinse and repeat. This, of course, likely leads to small, few-second-long video or voice feeds at very random intervals.]


Huh. Must have taken a wrong turn somewhere. [He shrugs his shoulders and continues to fool with the buttons perhaps like a cat would a toy mouse in its efforts to try to get the toy to do something.] Ohhhhh well.